Draft Feedback from Friends

Draft Feedback ->
Neil Powis; Needs more shots and longer so more storyline, he says the camera work is good, Also we need to know what the gangster is after before he takes it e.g. have a scene where he's being told to intercept. Editing was ok but can hear directors voices and actors talking/laughing in back ground.

Jamie Webster -> Needs to be longer with some experimenting shots e.g. high shots look down. Editing needs to be more interesting using effects like black and white for when needed, also the titles need to suit the actual film and they aren't action like.

Jack Kemp -> Around 1 mintue is not long enough for an opening so you will have to think of some way to extend it, also we need sound for when the chase occurs like an upbeat tune to create a rushed atmosphere. Overall it flows well it just needs a little more depth.

Ben Summerton -> Needs more length, and the ending needs to finish properly e.g. A get-away, also the fall on the fence looks fake so it needs to seek realism, the chase needs a beat aswell. The Editing was good except there was a little talking in shots in the background.